Six Sentence Sunday

7/7/2012

I awoke to the sound of beeping and the smell of antiseptic. The pain in my shoulder felt like a jackhammer had been trying to break up the bone. Thinking back, the last thing that I remembered was Adam driving in that blinding snowstorm. There was something else that was just out of reach in my
mind.

What had happened? Putting the sounds and the smells together I realized I was in the hospital.

Cara Bristol link

7/8/2012 02:31:09 am

Uh oh. I suspect her situation is about to get worse.

Melissa link

7/8/2012 03:17:47 am

It isn't her that she has to worry about.

Kerrianne Coombes

7/8/2012 03:07:29 am

Oh-no! What happened?

Melissa link

7/8/2012 03:19:11 am

Car accident and she wasn't alone.

Krystal Shannan link

7/8/2012 06:54:04 am

Good six. I want to know more.

Melissa link

7/8/2012 07:22:29 am

If my publisher picks this up, you can read the whole story! :)

Gayle Ramage link

7/8/2012 08:22:21 am

She's been in a crash?

Melissa link

7/8/2012 08:30:44 am

Yes, she was in a car accident. Pretty serious one too!

Jess Schira link

7/8/2012 02:59:17 pm

You're six really pulls the reader in, and makes them want to keep reading. I don't know what section of your book it comes from, but it would make a fantastic hook.

Melissa link

7/8/2012 03:02:06 pm

Thanks Jess. It is near the beginning of the book, second chapter I believe. The book is currently in submission so hopefully cross your fingers it will be available in the near future. :)

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